26-03-2019, 07:31 PM
(26-03-2019, 02:06 PM)Wild_Fantasy Wrote: Story sahi ja rahi thi lekin beech me break kyu maar diya yaar...
Ab yr bhai koi comments nhi aya kisi bhi friends ka , mujhe lga kisi ko ye story psnd nhi aa rhi h.......islye break le lya.....ab main bekaar m mhenet kyu kru jb koi bhi reader kahani ko appreciate hi na kre to........................
Jaise aapne comment kra i hope koi aur bhi kre aur apni advice de story ko batter bnane k lye .......to mja aaye story ko likhne m.aur readers ko pdne m.....................
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