HK's unreal world

[hellskitchen]

Fantastic plot bro.

But why are you in haste, going very fast.

could have detailed the f*king sessions with different women.

with different situations , women coming with different problems.

and he is using them in all angles in the name of pooja.

go slow with detailed description , it will be a big hit story.

HK's unreal world , you can put unimaginable things in this story.

go ahead.

i can understand what u are saying but in my story the shaap of poojari is the main concept if i hadn't done the plot quick then katrina will be thrown bake to 4th page so I thought what ever i do it should been seen from her perspective. thank u for the support.