22-01-2021, 10:36 PM
dude blackdesk.. I appreciate you for taking the initiative of taking forward this gem.. But please also realize that this story is more about slow seduction/ episodes of accidental nudity, rather than dirty fucking. There are already so many stories having plain sex but there are very rare which are seductive.. And this is one of them.. Though everyone has their own writing style, I suggest you to please maintain the core seductive nature of the story.. Don't make her a whore who goes around fucking everyone she comes across... Soumya is a dream of many, not the whore of many... People keep dreaming about her, get excited by seeing her figure, and try to trap her, but only a lucky few should get her... And that too after long episodes of seduction, as what happened with her neighbor... You could have continued with her seducing Vishnu or Ankur... Some incidents could be planned with Vishnu or lateron his friends.. Reg Ankur, I am sure it was Rishi who was using Ankur's bedroom for fucking his gf. Soumya may realize this truth and get attracted to Ankur again.. so few more adventures with Ankur could be planned. You can include some accidental nudity, some intentional exhibitionism by Soumya and slow sex in a loving manner..
What say?
What say?