Adultery MOHINI (Erotic Horror)

[Baban]

These Updates are good. But to be very honest,  the Original... I mean this same story in Bengali was a Killer. Damn Good. Just Awesome.   

I personally Love to read your written stories; be it in English, Hindi or Bengali.

Please.. Please Don't mind me saying this; this Hindi version is not matching that mark... and the taste.


Am very Sorry if this statement hurts you, brother.

You're doing a pretty good job. Carry On.

Thanks Dark soul.. You liked my story upobhog (bengali version)

Lekin main bengali aur hindi same to same nahi rakhta. Bahut changes karta hoo. Isliye story ek tarah se alag hi hota hai. Aapko ek baat poochna thaa... Aap ko meri stories acchi lagti hai isliye thanks. Lekin ek baat batao... Jab aapko meri bengali version itni pasand aayi toh wahan aapne positive koi feedback kyun nahi diya? Ek writer hamesha chahta hai ke unke readers ko agar story accha lag raha ho toh feedback de.... Lekin tab aapne kuch nahi bola aur ab aap is story ko compare kar rahe ho. Yeh toh sahi nahi hai bhai. Aap agar kharab mein feedback dete ho toh acchey lagne par bhi feedback do.

Dont mind..... Sab ka apna apna style hai. Sath jurey rahiye

Lekin bahut readers ko yeh Mohini acchi lag rahi hai isliye thanks friends