Fantasy Samverse: Samantha & Chai Novel - Ayurvedic Treatment For My Wife

[Saravroman]

Hello bro,

I am extremely impressed with your way of presentation. It's really amazing. I had read some Cuck stories, but your story is very promising.

My observations :

1. Chai and Gautam are friends with very hot wives. It looks like Gautam shared some secrets about his sexual life with Chai who asked Samantha to try those in their life too. But, these fetishes went out of control.

2. Looks like many people were interested in Samantha. Like Gautam, David and Chai's cousin. He is trying to find who actually responsible to this situation. But, he is the real answer.

3. Sanskrit sholka by Bhikari Baba is the strongest point here. Chai is workholic and he isn't able to give enough attention to his wife. This made their sexual life boring and to get their boring life excited, he choose an idea given by Gautam. 

4. I don't know who is giving Samantha assignment and keeping it hidden from readers is awesome. This helps readers to take part in story. I can't imagine possible person, but as a reader I'll go with David. Assignment are given by a person who loves this link too. He/she is into cuckold. 

5. This assignment of getting malai from shopkeeper is awesome. I'm looking for more scenes like these. 

Your story has great potential. It shows that you had proper plot developed and then you start with writing. I have great hopes from this one. I'll try to answer more Vikram Betal questions. 

-Silver

Silver Bro - you are one of the writers who inspired me to write!
Thanks for the detailed response!


Yes, there are so many men lusting and wanting Samantha 
- who gets a piece of the action and in which sequence, will be peeled layer after layer 
Appreciate you calling out specific parts of the plot on point 3 & 5 - many similar themes are soon coming!


Many thanks again,
SammieRoman.