12-01-2021, 04:11 PM
(12-01-2021, 10:26 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Mai ab jaldi hi kuch long updtae de ke aur jaise hi mujhe kuch 2 ya 3 din ka bhi time mila to ye kahani puri isi week nahi to next week puri kar donga yaha se afreen ka shoshan shuru karonga sex zyada story kma kyoki ab Afrene ka open hone ka time Aa Gaya hai.... To mujhe lag raha hai mai is kahani lo bahot long nahi chala sakta... Ise puri kar ke panding kahani mai se ek koi bhi shuru kar donga
Bhai as a reader, m to yahi chahta hu ki aapki ye story kabhi khatam hi na ho..... Isme naye naye characters aate jaae or add hote jaae..... Shayad baaki readers bhi iss baat se agree karte honge ki aapki writing ka ek alag hi style..... Aapki story me ek alag tarah ka seduction hota h...... Plus aapki updates dene ki speed kabile taarif....... Sach btaao to ye dekh ke thoda sa dukh hua ki aap ye story jaldi hi end Karne wale ho......
Aapki Hawas or Khoon Meri favorite story thi par aapne his tarah se Afreen ko yaha present Kiya h, ab ye story Meri favorite story ho gyi h xossipy ki or Hawas or Khoon iske baad h......