10-01-2021, 05:17 PM
(10-01-2021, 02:22 PM)Yampag Wrote: Yes, the sped is OK.. no need to go fast.. Slow seductions is very interesting and erotic as well.. yes you can add some spices by giving zatkaas in between... Like Hari is approaching and very much near to taste Menaka.. but something happened and he has to move away for some reason.. other side daraa is also planning but he also missed the chance in the last moment.. and Banked taste the fruits instead.. may be some other character's fortune shines... It's just a thought... But it's your story.. and you are the best judge of it.. but try for long storyline.. thank you...
Thanks for the feedback i have some interesting turns lets see how it works out
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