Ruchi Story –for Betterment of my family

[mouthinvader]

Felt you did not want to show Ruchi's thoughts, reactions to Ali's or Ali's reactions seeing such beauty.  Need 2 read sexual encounter with Reds how u did there (lack of time I just glanced @ it). Just another observation - like describing unnecessary details - how she poured oil n heated etc really not needed, learn to cover what u want to convey in few words, but use more words where needed ;)