Construction People Try Their Luck – Part I (Copied)
GREAT WAY OF WRITING. I WILL GIVE YOU SOME TIPS. PLEASE IMPROVE THAT THEN THE STORY WILL BE ONE OF GREAT
  • PLEASE CORRECT THE SPELL MISTAKES AND SEPARATE PARAGRAPH PROPERLY.
  • SLOWLY BUILD UP THE STORY LIKE ORIGINAL WITTER
  • NEVER MADE THE SUSHMITA PROSTITUTE OR DO NOT READER TO FEEL LIKE SHE IS A PROSTITUTE. ORIGINAL WITTER MADE HER CHARACTER DECENT AND EDUCATED. PLEASE MAINTAIN HER CHARACTER
THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORY. WHAT A NICE WAY.
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RE: Construction People Try Their Luck – Part I (Copied) - by ab123456123456 - 03-01-2021, 05:57 PM



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