03-01-2021, 05:57 PM
GREAT WAY OF WRITING. I WILL GIVE YOU SOME TIPS. PLEASE IMPROVE THAT THEN THE STORY WILL BE ONE OF GREAT
- PLEASE CORRECT THE SPELL MISTAKES AND SEPARATE PARAGRAPH PROPERLY.
- SLOWLY BUILD UP THE STORY LIKE ORIGINAL WITTER
- NEVER MADE THE SUSHMITA PROSTITUTE OR DO NOT READER TO FEEL LIKE SHE IS A PROSTITUTE. ORIGINAL WITTER MADE HER CHARACTER DECENT AND EDUCATED. PLEASE MAINTAIN HER CHARACTER