Adultery Harami balam

[Hina Shaik1]

As u wish.... Apke nagative way se mai story likhna band to nahi kar sakta.... Ha kuch din se busy ho to deemag mai kuch new idea nahi aata aur na hi mujhe story likhne ke paise milte hai.... Time nikal kar sabse zyada xossip par update deta ho aur ap jaise ek do log aake nagative cmmt deke sara moond kharab kar dete hai.... Agar ap koi acchi kahani likh sako ya kam se kam masaage kar ke bata sako to waise hi likh donga......

I was just trying to give a constructive feedback.. I apologize if I was harsh on my comments. In both of the recently posted updates there was more sex and less story!. I just request you to take your time and don't rush. You know better what a good kinky story should be.. Please don't get demotivated and don't stop writing
You are a gifted writer