01-01-2021, 11:19 AM
so new twist in anju's life.... modelling....pushed by saleh,
your story and narration is superb.... i'm also in favour of positive conclusions...
but, not a twisted happy ending
no one is innocent, everyone have to pay for their own deeds....
bobby already beared a lot of pain without any mistake on his own end... so he must be rewarded with the real love of his life....sofiya.... not the anju, he must know, understand and accept the reality.
navin always grabed everything by manipulation, taken advantages of the trust of navin, anju or whoever trusts him. he must loose, if not everything but most of things acquired by him croockdly ... be it anju or money.
now anju, she was carried on by her foolishness, ego and stickness to wrong decisions. i want her to pay for it. but not to hurt physically or loose her dignity.... only thing she must loose, her aim and achievements including a best companion.... to live a lonely and aimless life..... the punishment for breaching the trust of her parents/family as well as her wellwisher & best friend bobby.
let's see what happens next
your story and narration is superb.... i'm also in favour of positive conclusions...
but, not a twisted happy ending
no one is innocent, everyone have to pay for their own deeds....
bobby already beared a lot of pain without any mistake on his own end... so he must be rewarded with the real love of his life....sofiya.... not the anju, he must know, understand and accept the reality.
navin always grabed everything by manipulation, taken advantages of the trust of navin, anju or whoever trusts him. he must loose, if not everything but most of things acquired by him croockdly ... be it anju or money.
now anju, she was carried on by her foolishness, ego and stickness to wrong decisions. i want her to pay for it. but not to hurt physically or loose her dignity.... only thing she must loose, her aim and achievements including a best companion.... to live a lonely and aimless life..... the punishment for breaching the trust of her parents/family as well as her wellwisher & best friend bobby.
let's see what happens next