Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[sangram24]

@ Jeevanantham
@ sangram24

You people are amazing!

When I decided to write the unfinished story of Indiansubmale, I had to struggle to find out the motive of Kavita and also match with the incidents as described by Indiansubmale. Things were required to be accepted by readers. My tribute was addressed for a serious section of readers who thinks beyond sex. Human relationship and specially relationship between husband and wife, two persons connected with emotions without sex are always complicated.    Normally at some point, tragedy strikes.

Indiansubmale had concluded the finishing. At the most we can play round about to arrive at finishing point.  There could be different approaches to reach the finishing point. Most of the incidents as happened with Kavita aftermath are taken from real life. I preferred to create two amazing characters Jaya and Guruji mainly to open up life from different perspective. Here Jaya is still not fully matured, Guruji is ultimate. His views on life is for the life whereas Jaya is bubbling with youthfulness of a young woman.

 Even before disclosing abortion, Guruji had made Kavita spend her time with destitute children. It is absolutely impossible for Jaya and specially Guruji not to follow Kavita after they have religiously followed her. In chapter 27.2 Manu is discovered with his two grown up children. If you connect this fact with original of Indiansubmale, where he describes Manu as successful at the age of 40 when he writes his story. Looking at Manu's obsession for Kavita at the end of original chapter 26, Manu would be around 33 years age, things should be pretty clear to readers for extrapolation.

Sharing your shameful secret with your husband only and sharing the same secret with your husband when it is no more secret are quite different. For me it appeared, Kavita had no option but to vacate once her lust was exposed. Neither Jaya nor Guruji talked about lust even though they were well aware of the fact. Even Guruji left it for Kavita to disclose everything to Manu. Also a well maintained asylum closely keep an eye on the inmates.

So, what you feel the loose ends, I feel are ends with definite conclusion.

Yes, I could have ended with an epilogue. I left the blank for a romantic saga may be harnessed by a powerful writer in future. Are you really interested in a fixed epilogue? I preferred your imagination to grow in multi-directional romance.

Last thing first..... Yes we are interested in an epilogue. yes my imagination are already running in different directions to figure out what would have happened next..... but unfortunately i am not a good writer . so i cant build a good narrative around ,my imaginations or plots. and why any other powerful writer ? you can do it yourself. u have already invested so much in the story , u know the characters , their minds, their thought processes better than anyone else .  u can start a new sequel in the new year. this is just a suggestion !!. 

Kavita had no option after her lust was exposed, fine.... but to whom ?  to her consciousness . she spoke to her consciousness that night. ( BTW even i was always puzzled as to why she went on pills after inviting Prem if her motive was to get pregnant, it was contradictory)  my submission is why she couldn't have had this dialogue in bangalore much before, we all speak to our consciousness regularly... thats what makes us take decisions and reflect upon our actions. we don't need a serene surroundings with the Himalayas in the backdrop everytime. she had all the time for self introspection . 

I would have liked u to answer to  my queries point no 1 and 3. but that choice is urs. i obviously cannot complain after the dedication and commitment u have shown to finish adhering to ur timelines. I still believe there shud have been a Manu's POV , afterall he is the central character along Kavita in this story. 

Maybe u set the expectations bar so high that the climax ( atleast to me ) feels a bit of a let down .....