24-12-2020, 11:29 PM
(24-12-2020, 11:13 PM)Rocksanna999 Wrote: Thank you so much for your presence...Its your story... and surely you will do justice to it...expecting you to make it more erotic with more erotic conversation... i remember the sex scene with anjali was one of the most erotic episode i read ever... such descriptions and details.. I expect to see such episodes again..!!
Yes i agree with you last time i end this stroy because of my provocation... Some readers told me that i copy paste my stroy and some people blame so many things. On this site there are thousand of writers and thousand of readers we can not compare their word with others... I welcome suggestions and ideas and i will work on them .... But only on one condition your ideas and suggestions must be based on the story... But problem is this story understanding is its end part ... Till now its only introduction part and rest are small incidents of life.. people try to read only erotic and seductive material but without stroy erotic part is totally waste...
Best of luck!! And thanks for continuing