21-03-2019, 08:53 PM
nice update....
PREET da character sab toh jyada pasand aaya....KAMAL bhabhi chete krwa ditti (RISHTYA DI CHAAV wali) ........ KAVI ma'am.....
personally,mera favorite character hai es story da .......
ek taah enni detail ch scene create krde ho maza aa janda pad ke...bahut sohne
bahut wadiya likhde ho ....
keep going ma'am
keep writing
PREET da character sab toh jyada pasand aaya....KAMAL bhabhi chete krwa ditti (RISHTYA DI CHAAV wali) ........ KAVI ma'am.....
personally,mera favorite character hai es story da .......
ek taah enni detail ch scene create krde ho maza aa janda pad ke...bahut sohne
bahut wadiya likhde ho ....
keep going ma'am
keep writing