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Adultery PURAANI HAVELI - ʙᴀʙᴀɴ
(14-12-2020, 01:54 AM)JoHn GrEWaL Wrote: baban bhai agar zamindar ko marvana hi tha to priyanka ko jarur chudwana tha . us ko bali de deney detey aur city mein jakar kr ke heroines ki chudayi krwa te to aur bhi jabardast story ban jani thi . abhi to aisa lagg raha hai ke jaisey apney khadey lund pe talwar hi chla di ho . baki aap ki marji ...... ya to aap khud hi story se bore ho kr ke end kr diya hai ......

Bhai har ek ka apna apna aspect hai. Aap yeh chahte the.... Par main ek good ending matlab acchai ki jeet dikhana chahta tha. Burai ke khilaf acchai ki jeet. Main koi heroine angle lakar story ka main theme kharap nahi karna chahta tha. Aap ko aisa laga its ok.... But mujhey aur bahut readers ko yahi lagta hai ke jo hua accha hua.
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PURAANI HAVELI - ʙᴀʙᴀɴ - by Baban - 23-09-2019, 02:35 AM
RE: PURAANI HAVELI (Erotic Horror)☆ by Baban - by Curlygirl - 09-11-2019, 08:04 PM
PURAANI HAVELI - a erotic horror story - by Baban - 07-01-2020, 05:43 PM
RE: PURAANI HAVELI - a erotic horror story by Baban [ COMPLETE ] - by Baban - 14-12-2020, 02:02 AM
RE: PURAANI HAVELI - Erotic Horror - by Baban - 01-11-2021, 03:20 PM
RE: PURAANI HAVELI - Erotic Horror - by Baban - 02-11-2021, 01:07 PM



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