Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
(12-12-2020, 05:02 PM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote:
Hi Manasi,

You are doing great job here. 

Finally Kavita POV completed. Here in Kavita POV everything matching with Manu POV. You didn't miss anything. 

In Kavita POV her mind and her actions are not matching


Possibly, I have made some serious errors in representing Kavita in her mind and her actions post debacle of Prem.

It will be of immense help to me to understand my mistakes with your analysis. Please elaborate her mind and actions mismatch with precise examples as appeared in her confessions. Please try to be elaborative. It will be a great opportunity for me to look back and search for probable flaws. I may not interact immediately, but promise to join in interactive discussion in January 2021. I sincerely hope not to be disappointed.


In the meantime, I will continue with my next update 34.5 sometime tonight.
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Messages In This Thread
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 07:20 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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