Adultery Neha - Ye kya Kiya Maine - by Bindass08

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Hi, very nice story.. hot updates on ekdum perfect situation in story. Koi unnecessary sex scene nahi.. story interesting chal rahi h with a suspense ki ab age kya hoga ya ab neha kya karegi, kya step legi...

Mausaji ke sath last scene me jo thodi forcibly sex huwa hai.. kya ye ek reason hoga neha ka dil mosaji ke uper se hatne ka aur kya wo phir se unhe avoid krne lagegi, kyuki use bhi to ab aage badhna hai life me. Mausaji to starting se h aur wo jagah kaushal ka father lena bhi chahta h, so i thnk mausaji ab divert ho jayenge. Kya neha ki life me koi aur charecter, office colleage ya koi old frnd ayega age chal kr story me.. ya neha kaushal ke sath hi settle hogi last me.. kafi sare sawal arahe h man me ki neha kya karegi
Ek sugestion h.. komal n mosaji scene as already sugessted by anothr frnd is also good n strong. But komal ko neha n apne pita ke bare pata na chale.. ek side baap beti n other side sasur bahu.. almost same situation me do roles seperately chal sakti h.. aap ek gud n skilful writer ho.. so u can try..
Lets c ki writer kis side turn krte h story ko.. keep writing pls.