09-12-2020, 07:27 PM
(08-12-2020, 09:41 PM)kittepo Wrote: I am sorry Manasi - I had high hopes for you - It seems like I am listening to a Acadamia analyses. The enjoyment of the original story is gone here. You or the other auther NSEW1 just killed any joy in this story by extending it.
In Short
Too much analysis and mindless drivel and less enjoyment.
I can understand the reason for your disappointment. I am sorry to disappoint you. I had made my motive very clear in the beginning to find out the motive of Kavita. There should not be any ambiguity on this. Possibly, you have not read my first post.
It's not that I am writing this to woo you. What I want you to say that life is beyond lust & sex. Society, religion, ego, economy, family, revenge, greed, friendship, trust, blood relationship, health etc have contribution in life in varied proportions.
Many a times in this forum, I sincerely stated about characterization. If the story is not built on the theme on fantasy, character would behave naturally based on the stimuli either external or internal.
Saying so, like you or as a matter of fact like many, for the first time I read the story, I observed dubious character in Kavita and thought of it a fantasy one. Subsequent reading brought me to realization of some strange tuning in her character and thought it could be near to real life. I tried to find her motive and present tribute is to justify the same.
Whatever statistical data on human sexuality or anatomy I have provided or going to include a few more are well established facts based on scientific studies and you can always confirm. I have studied the story with clinical detection and proposed a hypothetical scenario to match with narration of Manu. I don't claim that it is the only scenario to match Manu's narration. In future, many such scenario may come out to explain better convincing way. You also may find out a better one. In that event, I will look forward to listen to you.
In case you read this and get convinced to read further, I make a sincere request. Please don't make any assumptions on any character. I am not supporting any character. I am trying to redefine the characters in logical way within the scope of original narration. Allow the characters to play. At the end of chapter 34, revisit the original story, and clearly specify where you find it deviated in my hypothesis. I will look forward to find lacuna in my thinking process. There will be a time gap of a week before chapter 35 is published.
Here I would like to emphasize again, chapter 35 was written first.
So, read with open mind, without constraining it with lust and sex as the only motive of life.
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