Adultery Royal Kareena Kapoor Khan ki barbadi ka safar

[Udaybhanu]

Zabardast but small.... I can understand it. I am a writer too. Har bar likhney ka zyada time nahi milta. Its ok.

But bahut uttejak build up tha bhai.... Ab aur bhi kamuk tarikey se likho. Is haseena ki under ki acchayi ko nasht kar do... Sirf jo rehe jayega woh hoga hawas aur kallu.

Thanks baban bhai aap to senior ho mere writing ke mamle me aap samajhte ho writing pura timing aur mood pe depend krta hai...


Aur story me achhayi kya sab kuchh nast kr dunga kareena ka dekhte jaao aap