Life must go on************ Completed
(05-12-2020, 07:24 PM)Athadu Wrote: A twist I didn't expect and want to turn like this. But this story is yours. And you can write which pleases you.
After that much of regrets, Bobby character changing like this I lost my feel for this story. But twist was very nice.
I think you are setting Saleh and Ahmad  characters for Anju.
After showing so much of good and making them like this I can't explain.
I wish sanaya. And Sofia get something better fit for them as you show case them as true loving persons.
Dont make all the good people into bad ones. Please show some concern for them why because those are few only????

Honestly... Character assassination's is not  my Aim.. Actual story is ends at part 1.. I start second part very early.....i found it as mistake in starting without having enough time to write.... But am trying to justify the story.....
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RE: Life must go on************ - by Eswar P - 11-11-2020, 10:03 AM
RE: Life must go on************ - by ktmguy2019 - 11-11-2020, 02:18 PM
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RE: Life must go on************ - by Eswar P - 11-11-2020, 07:39 PM
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RE: Life must go on************ - by ktmguy2019 - 12-11-2020, 05:58 AM
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