05-12-2020, 07:24 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-12-2020, 07:25 PM by Athadu. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
A twist I didn't expect and want to turn like this. But this story is yours. And you can write which pleases you.
After that much of regrets, Bobby character changing like this I lost my feel for this story. But twist was very nice.
I think you are setting Saleh and Ahmad characters for Anju.
After showing so much of good and making them like this I can't explain.
I wish sanaya. And Sofia get something better fit for them as you show case them as true loving persons.
Dont make all the good people into bad ones. Please show some concern for them why because those are few only????
After that much of regrets, Bobby character changing like this I lost my feel for this story. But twist was very nice.
I think you are setting Saleh and Ahmad characters for Anju.
After showing so much of good and making them like this I can't explain.
I wish sanaya. And Sofia get something better fit for them as you show case them as true loving persons.
Dont make all the good people into bad ones. Please show some concern for them why because those are few only????