04-12-2020, 05:56 PM
(04-12-2020, 03:20 PM)Fuckstar Wrote: Bhai aap bohot hi badiya writer ho..... Main jaanta hu ki ek update likhne me kam se kam 3-4 ghante lagte h....... Kabhi kabar ye 3-4 ghante nikaalna Kai hafto Tak mumkin nahi ho paata..... Wahi aap ek din me 2-3 update dete ho...... Uske upar aap 2 alag alag stories saath me chala rahe ho......
Bhai salute hai aapko.....
But to aapki iss raftaar ke kayal ho gye h hum...... T
Yahi Hai jab tak cmmt aate rahte hai to mere hath aur deemag fast ho jata hai aur jaha maine cmmt nahi dekhta to aisa lagta hai ab mere story mai Dam nahi rahi aur sochta ho dusri id bana kar alag likho.... Par sochta hai ek nam es mere is foam par hai use mai hata nahi sakta ab yaha se maine alag line di hai story ko... Kyoki nam hi harami balam hai to mai zyada carecter inderduce nahi kara sakta abhi filhal..... Par lagega new carecter ko interduce karo tab mai woh karonga bansal ko maine achanak abhi hataya aur woh set nahi hua sex ke liye abhi aur jo new line likhonga use pad kar mwza aur kuch nayapan aayega