02-12-2020, 10:06 AM
Bhai hawas or Khoon bohot hi tagdi story hai aapki..... Esa lagta hai ki agar kuch shabad likhunga uske baare me to uski bezzati ho jaaegi..... Par itna zarur kahunga ki Kamaal ke writer ho yaar aap...... Ummeed h ki aap uss story ko bhi aage badaaoge......
Bs ek request hai ki Mahnaz or Nazbeen ko abhi maa mat banwaao...... Kuch bhi karke unka bachha girwa do...... Or dono ko Danish or talha se unsatisfied hi rakho..... Kyuki uss story ka main plot hi ye hai ki dono biwiya apne patiyo se unsatisfied h...... Agar inke pati apne Bhai ki biwiyo ko satisfy Karne lage to wo fir incest ban jaaegi.... Or aapki story unique hai use incest me mat tabdeel karo balki or bhi character introduce kro.......
Baaki all the best...... You are an awesome writer
Bs ek request hai ki Mahnaz or Nazbeen ko abhi maa mat banwaao...... Kuch bhi karke unka bachha girwa do...... Or dono ko Danish or talha se unsatisfied hi rakho..... Kyuki uss story ka main plot hi ye hai ki dono biwiya apne patiyo se unsatisfied h...... Agar inke pati apne Bhai ki biwiyo ko satisfy Karne lage to wo fir incest ban jaaegi.... Or aapki story unique hai use incest me mat tabdeel karo balki or bhi character introduce kro.......
Baaki all the best...... You are an awesome writer