28-11-2020, 08:05 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-11-2020, 08:05 PM by rksun. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(28-11-2020, 12:02 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Nazbeen bahak gayi jaise kahani maine Phir nahi ikh sakta... Par ha ek lamba gape ke karan mai tabbsum aur nooein wali kahani puri na kr saka par ye kahani mai bhaot kuch socha hai sex ke sath ye kahani noval ke suspenss ke sath aage badegi jisme sab kuch ho sirf sex nahi... Yaha maine kuch alag feel se likh raha ho jaha har carecter ka alag roll ho....... Aur har carecter ki alag alag kahani ho.... Koi bhi cheez mai miss nahi karonga...... Hawas aur khoon sach mai maine jaldbazi mai likh di.... Par use pura karonga update bhi jaldi donga bus is kahani ko ek mod par le jake haws aur khoon ko kuch updte donga
chahe update thode late aye par apni skill ke hisab se he likho kyu ki agar story acchi mil rahi hoto log update ka wait kar sakte he. apki bato se lag raha he ye story bhi super hit hone wali he.
ek bat aur kehni thi apne jo desibess site par sumbul pandit raju lalan wali story likhi thi kya wo apke pass he ? ho to please usko bhi dal do yaha. wo bhi bahoat jabardast story thi.
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