28-11-2020, 12:02 PM
(28-11-2020, 10:11 AM)rksun Wrote: i am a big fan of yours specially Nazben Bahak gayi story.
staring bahot badhiya he... ye skill he apki writing ki...
hawas aur khoon wali story jaldbazi me likhi ho aisa feel huva wo story me apki skill utni nazar nahi aayi jo apki ab tak ki story me aati he.
please ye story ko apni skill ke according he likhiye, ye bhi superhit hogi.
Nazbeen bahak gayi jaise kahani maine Phir nahi ikh sakta... Par ha ek lamba gape ke karan mai tabbsum aur nooein wali kahani puri na kr saka par ye kahani mai bhaot kuch socha hai sex ke sath ye kahani noval ke suspenss ke sath aage badegi jisme sab kuch ho sirf sex nahi... Yaha maine kuch alag feel se likh raha ho jaha har carecter ka alag roll ho....... Aur har carecter ki alag alag kahani ho.... Koi bhi cheez mai miss nahi karonga...... Hawas aur khoon sach mai maine jaldbazi mai likh di.... Par use pura karonga update bhi jaldi donga bus is kahani ko ek mod par le jake haws aur khoon ko kuch updte donga