28-11-2020, 10:11 AM
i am a big fan of yours specially Nazben Bahak gayi story.
staring bahot badhiya he... ye skill he apki writing ki...
hawas aur khoon wali story jaldbazi me likhi ho aisa feel huva wo story me apki skill utni nazar nahi aayi jo apki ab tak ki story me aati he.
please ye story ko apni skill ke according he likhiye, ye bhi superhit hogi.
staring bahot badhiya he... ye skill he apki writing ki...
hawas aur khoon wali story jaldbazi me likhi ho aisa feel huva wo story me apki skill utni nazar nahi aayi jo apki ab tak ki story me aati he.
please ye story ko apni skill ke according he likhiye, ye bhi superhit hogi.