Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
Greatttttt.....
Your writing reminded me DMC (DevilMayCry) my another favorite writer on this forum..... His only story presently hanging in middle due to unknown reasons.... The Hunt
But you are more sharpen on the part of references... He choose established words (famous quotes).......but you choose established logics (prooven ethics)

You're already my favourite critic with breville1 and seema of xossip... On the list

Now you are on my favorite writers list also

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On the part of story.....
Kavita can washout her all misdeeds, by blaming amir for drugging and blackmailing her....
But....
Can she justify .....her invitation to amir for becoming houseguest and humiliating manu..... Anyhow

Most interesting part of this update.... For me.....
"Every story involving husband wife has minimum 5 versions"

Waiting eagerly For remaining part of this chapter
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33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by kamdev99008 - 25-11-2020, 08:34 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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