25-11-2020, 08:34 AM
Greatttttt.....
Your writing reminded me DMC (DevilMayCry) my another favorite writer on this forum..... His only story presently hanging in middle due to unknown reasons.... The Hunt
But you are more sharpen on the part of references... He choose established words (famous quotes).......but you choose established logics (prooven ethics)
You're already my favourite critic with breville1 and seema of xossip... On the list
Now you are on my favorite writers list also
.........
On the part of story.....
Kavita can washout her all misdeeds, by blaming amir for drugging and blackmailing her....
But....
Can she justify .....her invitation to amir for becoming houseguest and humiliating manu..... Anyhow
Most interesting part of this update.... For me.....
"Every story involving husband wife has minimum 5 versions"
Waiting eagerly For remaining part of this chapter
Your writing reminded me DMC (DevilMayCry) my another favorite writer on this forum..... His only story presently hanging in middle due to unknown reasons.... The Hunt
But you are more sharpen on the part of references... He choose established words (famous quotes).......but you choose established logics (prooven ethics)
You're already my favourite critic with breville1 and seema of xossip... On the list
Now you are on my favorite writers list also
.........
On the part of story.....
Kavita can washout her all misdeeds, by blaming amir for drugging and blackmailing her....
But....
Can she justify .....her invitation to amir for becoming houseguest and humiliating manu..... Anyhow
Most interesting part of this update.... For me.....
"Every story involving husband wife has minimum 5 versions"
Waiting eagerly For remaining part of this chapter