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Adultery Zeba Ek Housewife Aur Gangu Bhikari...........
(22-11-2020, 11:46 PM)Lactator Wrote: I disagree. Bhima literally is like the brute in every other story that has been written like this. In fact the Saniya story has a character same as bhima. Gangu's manipulation and Zeba's fleeting reluctance is working best for this story.

100% agreed. The story is going so great and all of a sudden people start to manipulate the writer to turn their story into something totally unrealistic. Gangu character is so strong that Zeba is unable to refuse his demands. She used to study in his school, she does not see him as some regular beggar but a person who she she can relate to. This so such a good match for and is as close to a real life incident. No exaggeration like other stories where an innocent housewife turns into a whore in 2 weeks. 
I admire the writer for thinking this deep and creating this masterpiece. Awesome job. Well done  yourock yourock
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RE: Zeba Ek Housewife Aur Gangu Bhikari........... - by rehanboy16 - 23-11-2020, 12:28 AM



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