Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
Hi Manasi,

What the hell is this? You are full of surprises. By reading the previous updates I thought kavita is desparate to meet her husband but her self pride not let that happen. She never understand Manu. She just feel her self lost and insulted in front of Manu and she just loose her temper and destroyed her self. At this situation nobody feel pity about her. 


Prem did so many bad things to Manu and kavita. Ac repair, movie theatre, in public, what else having a loud and wild sex with Prem when her husband stand out side of main door. All these incidents are disrespect to not only manu for kavita also but she never feel her self pride and respect. In kavita opinion Manu is very low not a man enough. Maybe kavita love Manu or not I didn't know about that but she never had respect for Manu. He is not a man she dream to marry. Manu failed to gain respect from kavita. 

This update looks like a dead-end for everything. I know it is not. Manu bring diverse papers with him so Manu not forgiven kavita or is it just a play to teach a lesson to kavita. At this point you can drive this story which ever way you want. Good job Manasi.


So next update will take longer than expected.

Thanks for the update.
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by Ramesh_Rocky - 21-11-2020, 08:20 AM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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