Incest Hawas - Rishteyaan Ch Hawas Te Ohna Da Anjaam (Incest , Adultry )

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Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai.. 

Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai.. 

Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge

sahi keha ...... ehna di bund ch ena dum kithey ..... ja te kisey baniye ne likhi lagg di aa avdi bhadaas kadhan de lyi .... may be ohna de naal eda hoya hovey kisey jatt ne us di gharwali naal eda kitta hovey .... jidda ki bhaiye jattiyaan de naal sex kr de ne , pr actually ch oho khud hi bhaiye likhde hundey ne story nu  .... punjabi ch bhain hunda te ehey behen likh de ne . Ajj nu Aaj likh de ne , hor v bohat galtiyaan hundiyaan ne . half hindi hi likhi jandey ne jdo ki ehna de dimag cho nikal janda ke story te punjabi ch likh rahey aa . vekheya nu dekheya likhi jaan ge .... itho pta lagg janda k story koi hindi writer likh reha aa ( writer. ki naal tatteyaan de ne ) ..... 
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