15-11-2020, 02:42 AM
(15-11-2020, 02:14 AM)Baban Wrote: Bhai yeh aapki story hai. Kya likhogey yeh aap pe haiThanks Bhai
Aap abhitak bahut bariyaa likhey ho... Aise hi chalte raho....
Varna aap agar zyada suggestion lete rahogey toh bahut readers apna apna fantasy aap se fulfill karna expect karengey . tab yeh aapki story nahi rahegi. Aap khud ke deemag se agey bariye . main ek writer hone ke naatey yeh bol raha hu ... Aap bhi khud ke idea se agey bariye.
Sirf itna hi bolunga.... Itna erotic aur garam tarikey se lilhiye ke partey hi hum sab ka halat kharap jo jaye . 10 inch ka vayanak lund wala badsurat buddha kallu ka dirty pervert roop ko aur bahaar nikalo.
Mera plan to set hai bas. Jaise ki story k start me mene likha hai ye Meri pehli story hai to mujhe pata to chalna chahiye na ki me sahi kr Raha hu ki nhi.
Aur ye story ekta Kapoor k serial jaisi hai ye lambi chalegi aur end v hogi.
Mene apna plot pehle se hi set kr Diya hu bas mujhe mere readers ka v idea Janna hai.
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