13-11-2020, 07:10 PM
(13-11-2020, 06:36 AM)Kingofcbe007 Wrote: Hi @storylover Karthik
Nanba last week padika start pani nethu nit full ah padichu inaiku tha mudiche unga story ah.
My comments.
1. Niraya incest story padichuruke but scene by scene ovoru line um erotic ah full mood la ye vachutukara story na athu unga story tha.
2. Nama karapnai kuda pani paka mudiyatha alavuku unga writing skill iruku.
3. Ipdila kuda seduce pani mood etha mudiyum nu malar character ah vachu puriyuthu malar pandra ovoru matter um avalo mood aguthu.
4. Dress shop la saleem avanida sunni ah malar kundi la orasunathum avanuke theriyama pavadai and panty ah kalatra scene ah padichu enaku vantha mood ku alave ila.
5. Malar ava payan kuda mela eri panuna sex scene ithu varaikum amma payan panatha scene avalo hot.
6. Megala antha kulathula kumaresan kuda pandra scenes la sola vaarthaigale ila.
7. Periya sunni ku aasa patu malar and magala adikara koothu sema sema hot.
8. Hospital la priya and rohini lesbo scene vera level.
Ipdi ovoru episode la um line by line hot ah erotic ah eluthi engala kai adika vachutu ipdi paathilaye poitingale nanba.
Plz plZ continue the story. Ithu just story ila nanba athukum mela . Neenga eluthra style apro use pandra words la engayume padikatha unique words.
Overall ah solanum na unga story and writing rendume vera level.
Romba request pani kekre engalukaga plz plZ continue the story nanba plz.
Nama website la Iruka story la ye one of the best and erotic story ithutha itha stop panathinga plzzzzzzzz
athunaalathaa naa romba naal ah continue panna solli kekran but pannave matraar ! #storylover
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