Life must go on************ Completed
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Probably explanations are not too erotic. Probably too much unnecessary dialogues.  I am feeling to write it to maximum emotions and situational explanations. I find most liked stories in the group are illicit relationships of women. Such stories have more viewers and likes. I am not looking for the number of readers but looking for the peoples who like few psycho. This story is more about love, sacrifice and patience. Probably people won't like it but you are free to criticize it. Few illicit relationship happened in my real life characters life but am thinking how to bring it to story without hurting the story line. I have mentioned about Naveen's relationship with few girls. Do you think that such part need more explanations? Then there will be more scope of such relationship. In this story line similar scope is there for sacrifice but I don't want Anju to sacrifice for her husband turned sexual relationship. Your suggestions are welcome.
In real life, Naveen's character took from my friend life in Mumbai. He is not a handsome man at first sight but his lover turned wife is extreme beautiful girl. I took Anju's figure from her. Few of Anju's features added in this story picked from the feature of my friend. Naveen is ditto to my friend except added handsome look. We friends masturbates several times by thinking about his wife but his character is enjoying weekend with us and picking a girl. I am not sure any of our friends attempt on her but we knew few of them made an attempt to impress her by revealing the truth of her husband character.( I am not sure whether they get inspired by reading stories of wife taking revenge on husband )  I don't know any one get succeed to see her pussy. It is not about pussy. I don't know anyone got the chance to touch her and make erotic. We always has a doubt that she is not interested but our friend has 100 words about the sex encounter with her.  What we understand is that she blindly believes her husband and discuss everything with him. Few of our beggar friends thought that they can make her doubtful about husband like in serials but everyone's effort went in vein. Only deficit I found in her body was less butt size and same time my friend is fully crazy on big butt. He still remains crazy about big butt girls and follow such girls. I didn't try on her but am not sure anyone get success in having sexual relationship with her. I don't know any got slap from her because such situations no one will tell truth.

Please don't think am criticizing any other writer. I really enjoyed many stories. Especially the story line of Married lady fucked by multiple men. That story stopped in the most erotic period. This story line is different from usual story. I am trying to justify myself that all. Please don't compare this story with other skilled writer way of writing.
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RE: Life must go on************ - by Eswar P - 11-11-2020, 10:03 AM
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