11-11-2020, 12:16 PM
Dubai Seenu, you are good writer.. best is portraying scenes.. but i think caught up in some logic.
this is just a sex story... illicit relationship brings more erotic..dont see logics pls.. but it is upto you..how u wish to taking ahead of story.
You are very good in writing.
this is just a sex story... illicit relationship brings more erotic..dont see logics pls.. but it is upto you..how u wish to taking ahead of story.
You are very good in writing.