07-11-2020, 11:00 AM
(02-11-2020, 11:48 PM)Sush44 Wrote: bhai aap khud hi bahot accha likhate ho...Sahi he bro....esha hot maza aaega.....waiting next
mera suggestion hai ki 4 episode mein 2-3 character add karna jo namrata ka kisi event ya situation mein seduce karte ho..jaise namrata kisi mall mein kapde lene ke liye gayi ho to udharka dukandar, hotel mein thehri ho to udharka waiter, cinema hall mein gayi ho to udhar uske baaju mein baithnewala unknown person..kisi club mei gayi hai to udhar dance karte samay uske papa ke friends ya udhar uske yoga ya fitness teacher seduce kar rahe hai aise scene dal sakte ho..
keep updating bro..