05-11-2020, 04:06 AM
Welcome back bro
Nice buildup..
Excellent addition of this harish character,
Just don't make her too bold so early make her as reluctant u can...
Nd try to avoid parts where Vishnu nd his friend share every details of naz with each other let them have there adventure separately... That's my suggestion bro .
Nice buildup..
Excellent addition of this harish character,
Just don't make her too bold so early make her as reluctant u can...
Nd try to avoid parts where Vishnu nd his friend share every details of naz with each other let them have there adventure separately... That's my suggestion bro .