15-03-2019, 12:31 PM
bahut sohna likh rhe ho KAVI ma'am......
aje puri tarh khulli nhi story....ki kujh chall riha ....
character v interesting lag rhe ne...khaas karke SIMI da character...personally i loved it.....
enna sohna likhde ho ji krda bas padi jayiye story.....
keep going ma'am....
keep writing
aje puri tarh khulli nhi story....ki kujh chall riha ....
character v interesting lag rhe ne...khaas karke SIMI da character...personally i loved it.....
enna sohna likhde ho ji krda bas padi jayiye story.....
keep going ma'am....
keep writing