27-10-2020, 08:25 PM
(This post was last modified: 27-10-2020, 08:26 PM by kittepo. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
It seems you cannot handle the crux of the original story - Now you are watering it down to "sweetness" - No cuckolding, no "master" no "hotwife" no humiliation. No derived pleasure from being a emasculated cuckold (as the original author wanted it"
Unnecessary Characters like Dr Preethi.
I am sorry, the reason original story captured people attention is because "It is against the norm" it is simple (no unnecessary interaction with external characters) if any thing they are to establish for the stories sake (Neighbor boy, the store owner, the couple (aslam and pooja)
Where is threesome with Gowri, Prem and Kavitha --
I am sorry -- it seems the heat that original author produced cannot be sustained by you
Unnecessary Characters like Dr Preethi.
I am sorry, the reason original story captured people attention is because "It is against the norm" it is simple (no unnecessary interaction with external characters) if any thing they are to establish for the stories sake (Neighbor boy, the store owner, the couple (aslam and pooja)
Where is threesome with Gowri, Prem and Kavitha --
I am sorry -- it seems the heat that original author produced cannot be sustained by you
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