Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
Hi manasi,

So beautifully well crafted continuation. I gave up on this story long time back since all authors who continued either took this story into different path which didn’t align with original story or play with words. It always baffled me why kavita did the things to hurt manu. I am convinced with the explaination given and narrative in this continuation 

Hurting some one who love you unconditionally is baffling. But kavita is not the only person to blame. Fault on manu side as well which was explained in the latest episode. I am not expecting an fairytale ending but I fell there is still scope for both of them to live happily given they still  love each other. But the problem is trust is not ter. How it will gained

My guess for next episode 

Kavita will open the door for manu. Prem might have already left the house.kavita trying to explaining Prem will start from next morning

I am so looking forward for the discussion of manu and kavita. How kavita is going to convey all things to manu. It would difficult task for author but u r more then capable to do it splendidly. I have become a fan of your writing. All the best. Kudo to you for amazing writing and though process

Stay safe and take care

Thanks
Siva
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by Siva82 - 25-10-2020, 08:08 PM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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