Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

[themaskeditor]

So............                Now atul's pay out started to his sin. He is johnny bravo, so over confident about himself, always thinks for himself only and do make act according to that. He never learn t from previous mistake.

neeti-rajat together set up atul.

Your writing never gave feeling of an erotic writer. You are a perfect mainstream writer who knows and deliverers each aspect of story together balanced having equal balance between story, character, incidence. I found after reading your all previous stories and the current one that you always made male protagonist character super human in all aspect look, performance, behavior, nature but always do act foolish. His foolishness pull story to finish line but in end you never blame him for his foolish act while you all female protagonist female character pulled story to finish line due to weakness of her lust and somehow in end you UN-spokenly  hints reader to think all messed was due to her brainless lust instead male protagonist have no blame for his many no-reasoned foolishly act.

Don't take it as complain, take is as appreciation and just my conclusion in positive ways.

I have seen countless authors that begin the story with a positive note but they seem to loose the plot somewhere down the line. There are hardly a handful of authors who have the ability grip the readers from start to end. 

Well said, he knows very well to play with human emotions. 

Also apart from the erotic content it is the whole some story that keeps us bonded. He qualifies perfectly for the mainstream writer. His scene descriptions makes it like very real, it's like almost being enacted right in front of us. 

I have come across real life characters with similar sentiments from his story of "Knowing my wife..." series.