Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[manasi]

Hi Manasi

I don't know why but every time I read this story ( the original one, the completed one, the on going one and yours) it keeps me engrossed in it completely. Sometimes I become on of the character and start hating, enjoying, getting frustrated, emotional...and all. 

Your version is entirely different and you are giving a different approach that too clinically.

Now to see why doctor Preethi became so emotional and in what way she is related with Manu ( my doubt is she might have lost her daughter in similar fashion, only the characters got reversed...may be).

But it is quite interesting to read the story behind the pictures even though it is coming out of your imagination. Eager to see how Kavitha is going to stay with out sex for 2 months, what is the excuse she is going to say to Amir and what & how gouri's involvement in this, what are her expectations and rewards.

Waiting to see what is next. 

Your queries are slightly baffling. I didn't understand, why staying 2 months without sex would be difficult for Kavita?

For long 4 years in married life, she was deprived of orgasmic sex on regular basis. The sex life of Kavita with Prem is just two months old marred with sex drugs. When sex drugs are withdrawn and treatment continues for counteracting that, staying without sex for two months should not be a problem. Amir is already due to vacate her house on Sunday itself as agreed earlier. He is secretly administering sex drugs to Kavita, which she is presently aware. Does Kavita require to give excuse to Amir to throw him out of her house?

I am more focused on Kavita character and I may not explore much on other characters, she is interacting, unless I am compelled to do so. Otherwise, it will become  another 'Arabian Nights'. 

I strongly believe, multitasking can have negative side effects, if not synchronized properly, when variables are defined in same name with different characteristics.


I am working with next chapter and likely to be back by 25th Oct.