Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
Hi Manasi

I don't know why but every time I read this story ( the original one, the completed one, the on going one and yours) it keeps me engrossed in it completely. Sometimes I become on of the character and start hating, enjoying, getting frustrated, emotional...and all. 

Your version is entirely different and you are giving a different approach that too clinically.

Now to see why doctor Preethi became so emotional and in what way she is related with Manu ( my doubt is she might have lost her daughter in similar fashion, only the characters got reversed...may be).

But it is quite interesting to read the story behind the pictures even though it is coming out of your imagination. Eager to see how Kavitha is going to stay with out sex for 2 months, what is the excuse she is going to say to Amir and what & how gouri's involvement in this, what are her expectations and rewards.

Waiting to see what is next. 
    :   Namaskar thanks :ఉదయ్
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by Uday - 23-10-2020, 03:45 PM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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