14-10-2020, 06:08 PM
Chickfry
Dear author thanks for replying me back, well nowadays everyone is busy in their respective world. And its very difficult for someone who allocate their time and space for US by giving their hardwork in creating wonderful stories. I would like to say few thing which I have come across all these years (its not an advice just a suggestion you can say)
1. Please dont pay attention to crap what few people say, your story is wonderful no doubt and moreover there are many silent readers (I was one too) so don’t count for comments and post a lot.
2. I am certain that you are kind of writer who is not short on ideas, but may be lack of time. Please take time like two updates in a week will go.
3. Don’t make it a porn story, remember this is a slow building sex story so develop like it.
For porn people can easily get into porn sites or infamous webseries. But its a story where people get to imagine their own character as per their sexual imagination. I already had a debate with few authors regarding topic “Webseries V/s Sexstories”.
4.As per the story is concern you can go through these points but let me tell you I have no intention to dilute your ideas, this is your story you have full right to steer it in your own way:-
(a) let the husband be more suspicious about his wife bindu, you can take atleat 10 more pages just to reveal the truth to husband.This will keep up the interest among the readers. One fine eg I would like to give is the story “The unwanted Houseguest “ the original author took 14 pages just to reveal the illicit affair.
2.Don’t make a silly cuckold story, like husband licking cummed wife pussy, watching his wife getting banged, wearing clown dress etc. You have already depicted him as a smart husband good knowlege in IT. Make him a fighting husband, a worth less fight to get back his wife.Make him confused like hell.
3.One imp thing about the characters ,Dont Make Bindu character like a silly stupid lady who easily falls for Shakti... Make her bit smart ( indeed she is smart, she worked in a company temporary). Let her play mind games with the husband , making husband more confusing.make her loving and caring wife but mistress of only Shakti kapoor. Both of them playing games with the husband.
4.please please don’t make Bindu indulge sex with multiple men. She got what see needed, strong, handsome, powerful man. The more characters you involve the more complex it becomes. Bindu is not a pornstar she is a good beautiful housewife with lot sexdrives and this is not a gangbang story.
5. Lastly make a love affair between Shakti and Bindu. She is not a sextoy.
Thank you
Dear author thanks for replying me back, well nowadays everyone is busy in their respective world. And its very difficult for someone who allocate their time and space for US by giving their hardwork in creating wonderful stories. I would like to say few thing which I have come across all these years (its not an advice just a suggestion you can say)
1. Please dont pay attention to crap what few people say, your story is wonderful no doubt and moreover there are many silent readers (I was one too) so don’t count for comments and post a lot.
2. I am certain that you are kind of writer who is not short on ideas, but may be lack of time. Please take time like two updates in a week will go.
3. Don’t make it a porn story, remember this is a slow building sex story so develop like it.
For porn people can easily get into porn sites or infamous webseries. But its a story where people get to imagine their own character as per their sexual imagination. I already had a debate with few authors regarding topic “Webseries V/s Sexstories”.
4.As per the story is concern you can go through these points but let me tell you I have no intention to dilute your ideas, this is your story you have full right to steer it in your own way:-
(a) let the husband be more suspicious about his wife bindu, you can take atleat 10 more pages just to reveal the truth to husband.This will keep up the interest among the readers. One fine eg I would like to give is the story “The unwanted Houseguest “ the original author took 14 pages just to reveal the illicit affair.
2.Don’t make a silly cuckold story, like husband licking cummed wife pussy, watching his wife getting banged, wearing clown dress etc. You have already depicted him as a smart husband good knowlege in IT. Make him a fighting husband, a worth less fight to get back his wife.Make him confused like hell.
3.One imp thing about the characters ,Dont Make Bindu character like a silly stupid lady who easily falls for Shakti... Make her bit smart ( indeed she is smart, she worked in a company temporary). Let her play mind games with the husband , making husband more confusing.make her loving and caring wife but mistress of only Shakti kapoor. Both of them playing games with the husband.
4.please please don’t make Bindu indulge sex with multiple men. She got what see needed, strong, handsome, powerful man. The more characters you involve the more complex it becomes. Bindu is not a pornstar she is a good beautiful housewife with lot sexdrives and this is not a gangbang story.
5. Lastly make a love affair between Shakti and Bindu. She is not a sextoy.
Thank you
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