13-10-2020, 07:08 PM
Hello Game40it,
Just completed reading your story. Sorry for late reading and respond.
You are one of the best writer in this forum. The way you establish the characters in story was good and the most impressive thing in your story was the conversations between the characters. It simply amezing. Every word exchanging between the characters was truly thoughtful and meaningful too and it will explain how the person handil the situation, how it drives to next step very thoughtful.
This story was completed long time back, I am expecting new story from you soon don't take too much gap my friend please start a new story ASAP.
Just completed reading your story. Sorry for late reading and respond.
You are one of the best writer in this forum. The way you establish the characters in story was good and the most impressive thing in your story was the conversations between the characters. It simply amezing. Every word exchanging between the characters was truly thoughtful and meaningful too and it will explain how the person handil the situation, how it drives to next step very thoughtful.
This story was completed long time back, I am expecting new story from you soon don't take too much gap my friend please start a new story ASAP.
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