Adultery Betrayals & Sacrifices...

[worldlover]

Hi @worldlover 

I am already a big fan of ur writing but let me give u few facts on your concerns. 
Your story is very unique and awesome . It’s not pure adult story. It’s crime thriller and adult is one component of it. And amount of character is your story is so enormous not like anything seen in any other story. Usually we see max of 10 char in adult story. Why I am pointing out is ur story is complex in a unique way. your story view hit is more than 27000 which is very big. Not all people who read ur story will comment of so many reservation they might have. It took me 2 yrs to comment on story due to my reservation and it want to be anonymous.

You story is building up so nicely and it’s clearly going in good direction. 

Coming to concern part

1. Since the story is so complex with multiple character if u delay the update it become problem for reader to follow correctly. Let me explain my problem here I think most of them might be able to relate it. If the story update is delayed more then 2 weeks I don’t remember all the char relationship and i had to go back and read previous update to come up to speed. 
Solution : if you could give update at least in 2 weeks it will help tremendously 

2. Adult component is little on leaser side on ur story. Since u treat adult as one component of this complex story.to be very frank with you I don’t view this as issue. Other reader might expect this little eloborate
I would let u to decide if I want to eloborate it or not

As an writer u have the complete freedom and decision making capability to go which route is fine with you.

u r one of the finest writer. I love ur writing

Don’t forgot ur update today. We are still
Waiting to see how binisha outing turn out

Thanks

Thanks for your overview and the compliments. I am not finished with the update. Today I was catching up to the stories that I like in this site. Then I got working on my story. Still have not finished it yet. So, not sure if I will be avle to post it tonight. It's not my fault, Binisha is doing some very naughty things here on her day out hence the delay in my update. #its_all_binisha's_fault.