09-10-2020, 12:33 PM
time to bring back mention of hubby's sitster , and move to hubby wife theme with which story started ,...and that made it different a bit more intimate , personal , teasing and full of personal touches ,....a series of f###s makes it no different from host of other stories , ...u r different , your story is different keep it up , you know how to write how to keep readers on the edge of seat ,...post more