08-10-2020, 11:57 AM
(07-10-2020, 06:29 PM)Avishek Wrote: wow!! amazing ending. so emotional. Is story ko parney ka 2 nazariyaa hai. ek isko ek garam hot sasur bahu ki sex story ke tarah para jaa saktaa hai, aur dusra is story ko ek betey ki aankhon dekhi kahaani ke hisab se bhi para jaa sakta hai. jahan beta dekhta ke kaise dheere dheere uski apni Maa badal gayi, kaise apni hi maa ko beta samajh nahi paa raha tha, kaise apni hi Maa se bechara darrne laga tha. aur aakhir usne kho diya apni Maa ko. uski Maa usko chorkey apne sasur ki paas chali gayi aish karne .
aur is story ka last line - mere papa namard nahi asli mard hai. wow.. brilliant. sirf woh hi mard nahi hota jo biwi, gf ko sex ka pleasure de... balki is story mein Rohan ke papa ne jo kiya usse pata chala ke Asli Mard toh wohi hai... the real Man... who sacrificed everything to save his kid. He is the real Man.. . and the dadaji is just a pervert fucker.
one of the best story of xossipy (for me. )
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Ek writer humesha ek aise reader ke comments ka intezar karta hai jiske feedback ke Sath writer ke khudkey thoughts, feelings match karey . thanks Avishek for understanding the story's main plot . yeh jitna ek sex se varpur erotic thriller hai , utna hi ek sad story bhi hai . ek betey je liye sabsey vayankar aur dukh ki baat hoti hai jab woh dekhta hai uski khudki Maa jo abtak bahut jaani pehechani , pyar karne wali , care karne wali mummy thi woh dheere dheere ek anjaan insaan banti jaa rahi hai, apni hi maa se betey anjaan hote jaa raha hai.... Kuch harkat , kuch baatein us betey ko darne mein majboor karta hai . apni hi maa ko bina kapron ke kuch gandi aur ajeeb karte hue dekh raha hai ... Sochiye us betey ke upar kya guzarta hoga ? Aur main is baat ko always clear karna chahata tha ke tagra 6 foot ka insaan jo bahut taqatwar hai, aurton ko pleasure deta hai ... Woh jitna bara Mard hai , utna hi baraa Mard woh Pitah bhi hota hai jo sirf naam ka nahi ... Asal mein baap hota hai... Jo zarurat parney pe apney bacchey ke liye sab khusi sacrifice karne ka Dum rakhta hai.


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