Adultery PERVERT - BABAN

[Baban]

Baban bhai don't mind but the Chandaji's response is better than the story. 

I didn't like the ending as a positive ending is always more desirable. Also in last two three updates it seemed stretched out. 

I have read all your stories in this section and they had twists and turns and amazing narration which was always at an even pace. The story didn't live upto your calibre as a writer. 

Waiting for more stories from the most repped writer.

First of all Thank you curiousbull❤️
Thanks for sharing your thaught and views. Main koi excuse nahi de raha par dekhiye ek writer ko reality aur fiction ke beech ek balance karna parta hai. Full reality or fully fiction dono hi story ko cheap bana dete hai ... Isliye kabhi kabhi reality ke sath unrealistic kuch lines add karni parti hai. Is story ke liye isse behetar ending aur kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Kyunki aisa hum news mein , tv mein dekha hai bahutbar . Baaki yeh reader ke upar hai ke woh kaise ek story ko enjoy karengey. Aap ko utna accha nahi laga its ok. Par aapko meri dusri stories pasand ayi uske liye thanks. Mujhe most repped writer aap sab ne hi banaya . aap sab ka pyar aur biswas aise hi sath rehena chahiye.