08-10-2020, 09:19 AM
(07-10-2020, 05:18 PM)chandamadam Wrote: Love the ending... It is the most important thing in the world. Being righteous.
No one is going to cry when the mother dies. Father of the little boy indeed is a real man. You should have added a part where the father re-married and son gets love of a real(step) mother he deserves.
As someone who cheated her husband various times with different men, I know its fun. And super easy nowadays.
But the consequences are dire. I know of women, colleagues etc. who got caught and their life turned to hell overnight. A friend of mine lost 15 kgs in few weeks after her husband caught her cheating. She never looked beautiful again. No one called and addressed her with respect anymore including her own children, parents, siblings and colleagues. She looked 20 years older after that incident. Her husband didn't divorced her for sake of their children but her life became pure torture. Her husband even doubted that children off the wedding weren't his. I had to counsel her 5 days a week daily for more than a year to curb her suicidal instincts. I know it will stay with her for every second of her life.
There are so many real incidents I know of. So called lovers/bf/fuckbuddies/relatives who enjoyed with them never take responsibility after husband(s) find out. Some couples get divorced because men can't take it out of their minds and hearts easily. Even divorce is not so easy. Right from the court peon to judge will try their luck with the lady.
Some stay together for the sake of children and society. But life is always worse, pure-torture after, specially for the lady.
If you are having problems in your relationship/marriage, speak to each other. Tell your better halves what you don't like about them and what they should do about it. Talking will solve 95% of the problems. You can separate if it still does not work out, of course.
To have sex or an emotional affair with someone outside the marriage might seem sexy, thrilling, fun, easy, beautiful, adventurous, satisfying, youthful and revengeful but its highway to hell and torture; both emotionally and practically.
Baban bhai don't mind but the Chandaji's response is better than the story.
I didn't like the ending as a positive ending is always more desirable. Also in last two three updates it seemed stretched out.
I have read all your stories in this section and they had twists and turns and amazing narration which was always at an even pace. The story didn't live upto your calibre as a writer.
Waiting for more stories from the most repped writer.