07-10-2020, 05:04 AM
(06-10-2020, 06:57 PM)manasi Wrote: The first sentence of the original story goes like this, "My name is Manu Sharma, 40 years old, one of the respectable hardworking guys you might have known in your own lives."I am not expecting sex in your writing, one of your readers was expecting something else, that's why I told him what you've mentioned at the beginning, in a cuckold story cuckolds stay cuckold till the end, that's why they are called cuckold stories. But you aren't writing a cuckold story, you're probably turning an incomplete cuckold fantasy into something else. Anyways, will be waiting for your next update.
Manu's future is already written by indiansubmale. He is hardwirking and respected in society at the age of 40 years. He got married at age of 28 years and story unfolded after 4 yeras. So, within a span of 7 years, he recovered and extablished. Definitely, he has overcome his negative traits.
As regard to the eroticism, please view my tribute not in isolation. If you consider it a part of the main story, don't you think a lot of erotic descriptions are already included. People are living not only for sex but other important aspects also play simultaneously.
I request you one thing. Can you please list down the positive and negative traits of Manu character.
Thank you again for reading and request for joining in the poll.